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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I just want to start off by saying how much I love the look of this picture. The detail of the horns is beautiful and the style his face is done in is amazing. I love the varying line thickness on the jacket and the way his grin is all lopsided.

The shading on the horns looks lovely, but the fact that no where else is shaded (save for the tips of his hair (which I assume isn't really shading so much as his hair changing to a different color there?)) makes it look a bit unbalanced. Having shading under the jacket collar, neck, and on his face where the hair falls over would really complete the picture.

A bit of a personal/style choice thing with the eye covered by hair. It looks somewhat blank to have it not there at all & it really sticks out since you should be able to see at least a bit of that eyebrow, and since his other eyebrow is really dark & prominent, it makes the blank side of his face seem a bit off. Having at least an idea of the eye being there would make it seem more even/complete.

The last thing is that his collar bone looks like it's down where it would be (in proportion to where his head is) if he were standing up straight, while his shoulders are placed up further like he's leaning forward or hunching over.

Overall, I really like the look of this and the only things that could be called problems are pretty small for the most part and don't distract too much from the rest of the picture. c: